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   제 목   Things I want to learn.    상 태  
   작성자   cloe2848    등록일   2018-10-11
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There are a lot of things I can do. But I can't do all of things. So I choose 3 things I want to learn. 1. scuba diving Scuba diving is easy to learn because I know how to swim. And I have been loved water When I was young. The ocean and dolphine are so pretty. 2. baking cup cake I love making pretty thing. It is so cute and mini. So I also like making foods. 3.make miniature. Small Thing is so cute! I like to make small and real food. But I can't, Imake miniature. I feel confidence When I make 1 miniature.

 

CORRECTIONS:

There are a lot of things I can do.

But, I can't do everything.

So, I chose 3 things that I want to learn.

First is scuba diving.

It's easy to learn because I know how to swim.

I love water since when I was young.

The ocean and dolphins are so beautiful.

Second is baking a cupcake.

I love to make pretty thing.

It is so cute and mini.

I like making foods too.

Third is making miniature.

A small thing is so cute.

I like to make small things and real foods.

But, I can't.

I can only make miniature.

I feel confident while making one miniature.

 

COMMENTS:

Good job, ge hyeon bong! Keep it up! ^^

/Leny/

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