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   제 목   Carrote    상 태  
   작성자   boram0806    등록일   2018-10-12
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Thursdy October 11, 2018 Tese day, I am glower to carrote. But, I don't like carrote taste. I just like carrote's shape. It looks very good. So, I have carrote collections. carrote pencil, carrote pen and carrote eraeser. And, I love my carrote collections. It is so cute !!!

 

CORRECTIONS:

_____ day!

I glower to the carrot.

I don't like it's taste.

I just like it's shape.

It looks very good.

So, I have carrot collections.

I have a carrot pencil, a carrot pen and a carrot eraser.

And, I love my carrot collections.

They are so cute.

 

COMMENTS:

Good job, Esther! Keep on improving.

/Leny/

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