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   작성자   boram0806    등록일   2018-11-08
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Thursday, November 8, 2018 Today, my mom buy mandarin. I like mandarin very much!!!( I love mandarin ) So, I ate very fast. I like mandarin. but I hate mandarin's white pice.

CORRECTIONS:

Thursday, November 8, 2018.

Today, my mom bought a mandarin.

I like mandarin very much.

So I eat it so fast.

I like mandarin, but I hate mandarin's white piece.

COMMENTS:

Good job on creating the sentences! Let's work on some grammar structure and please expand your vocabulary.

-Lovely

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