On the 9th of November Today's night my sister crying. she sick!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm very scary. why? .............. I don't no but I'm sad. becouse my sister is sicksicksick . I don't like sick.
On the 9th of November which is today's night, my sister is crying.
She's sick! I'm very scared.
Why? I don't know but I'm sad, because my sister is sick.
I don't like sick.
Good job on creating the sentences! Let's work on some grammar structure. By the way, I hope your sister is getting better now. Keep on writing!