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   작성자   ljm2327    등록일   2019-02-11
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I went to see a movie which had good reviews with my boyfriend. Movie title is Extreme Job. It is the story of the police who have to work at the chicken place to catch the criminal. No one knew how to make chicken, but they developed a unique menu with one person’s idea. Eventually they earn more money than when they are police officer and they catched a criminal. There are many funny scenes and I watched the movie with a smile. It was really better than I expected.

CORRECTIONS:

I watched a movie that has a good reviews with my boyfriend.

The title of the movie is Extreme Job.

It is about the story of the police who have to work at the chicken place to catch the criminal.

No one knew how to make a chicken, but they developed a unique menu with one person’s idea.

Eventually they earn more money than they were police officer and catching a criminal.

There are a lot of funny scenes and I watched the movie with a smile.

It was really good movie than what I expected.

COMMENTS:

Nice sentences! I wanna hear more from you, Leah. Keep on writing!

-Lovely

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