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   작성자   jinyeom    등록일   2019-06-12
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Today, I got a internet problem. Internet problem is we can't hear anythings or our class go out by it self. At the first ime I was little bit of surprise but now I am okey. My mom said, "Haa I wish it doesn't happen anymore." Why does internet problem happening? I think it because of so many people want to join that webs. So it can't beared. How can we solve the internet problem? We must do it by 5G? Hhaa..

CORRECTIONS:

Today, I got an internet problem.

 Our problem is that we can't hear anything during our class and it suddenly logged out by itself.

At first, I was little bit surprise but now I am okay.

My mom said that she  wish that it won't happen anymore.

Why does an internet problem happening?

I think it's because of so many people want to join that webs.

So it can't bear.

How can we solve the internet problem?

 Must we do it by 5G?

 

 COMMENTS:

Hi Jiny! I'm sad to hear about that. I really hope that it will not going to happen again. By the way, I hope you still had fun during the class. I wish to hear more stories from you. Just keep on writing!

-Lovely

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