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   작성자   mum06    등록일   2019-06-12
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My name is kang min seo and English name is Evan. fam 13 years old. My family is five. my favorite food is chicken. My favorite sport is soccer. How is your teacher?(Family member or favorite)

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My name is Kang Min Seo and my English name is Evan.

I am 13 years old.

 We have five members in our family.

My favorite food is chicken.

My favorite sport is soccer.

How about you teacher?(Family member or favorite)

 

COMMENTS:

Hi Evan! I'm glad to know more about you. I'm Teacher Lovely and I'm already 21 years old. We also have five family members. My favorite food is steak and pasta. I don't have a favorite sport. I want to know more about you, Evan. I hope to read your next composition! Keep on writing!

-Lovely

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