Untitled Document
   
 
Home > 커뮤니티 > 영작교정 
 
   제 목   Soccer    상 태  
   작성자   gc1057    등록일   2020-10-14
   내 용
 

Correction:

Soccer

We played soccer during gym class. We couldn't play soccer and played futsal. Because harmful substances were detected in the playground. We did shooting training in 5th period. But I didn't play well. So I'm sad. We played soccer game in 6th period. Our team scored a goal. So the score was 1-0. After much time, the game ended without scoring any more goals. So our team won. It was a really fun time.

   이전글 today is a happy
   다음글 Thursday