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Goal

I played soccer in Changche class today. I was in the blue team. The first game was played with the white team. At first, the white team scored a goal. And I scored a goal to tie the score. I felt very good. The second game was played with the green team. At second, the green team scored a goal. It was kind of empty. So I lost the second game. It was a good day because I scored a goal today.

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