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   작성자   pjh0223    등록일   2017-12-03
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December 3 sunny and Sunday I played wil game I'm excited because I 1st "hahahahaha I"m 1st " But my brother is the last. And very laugh. Specially Mario games very funny. Next time I played SUPER MARIO game

 

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December 3, Sunday

It's a sunny day. I played a game and I was so excited because I was on the 1st place. "Hahahaha I'm 1st" but my brother was the last. I laughed hard especially because Mario game was very fun. Next time I will play Super Mario game.

 

 

Rating: 94%

Job well done Jin Han. Please continue practicing! :-)

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