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   작성자   pjh0223    등록일   2018-01-21
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Today We family went to the geojedo but my Mom No went to the geojedo because my Mom is very tired My dad and I go to Fishing but not catch the fish. "Why nothing here fish ???? umm....." At the night We go to the catch fish again but not fish. We very angry and tired and...... "WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!" We very nurvouus. Because I catch the fish and brothers too. "hook!!" The fish catch again!! We very nurvaus and happy today.^_^:


Today, my family went to Geojedo but my Mom didn't go  with us because she's very tired. My Dad and I went fishing but we didn't catch any. "Why is that there's no fish here?" I said. At night we went fishing again and still haven't caught any. We were angry and tired and..."WOOOOOW!!!" I said. We got very nervous because finally I and my brother caught a fish. Hook! We caught another and we were very nervous and happy for today. :-)


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Keep on trying Jin Han! Good Job!

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