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   작성자   cloe2848    등록일   2018-04-12
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My name is ga hyeon. let me introduce about my dream. hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! I want to be A space scientist because... We don't know about space well So I wan't to study about space. And! I think the space looks beautiful. At last. I wan't to see the Earth!!!! (It's my three reson.)

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My Dream

My name is Ga Hyeon. Let me tell you about my dream. I want to be a space scientist, because we don't know about the spcae well. That's why I want to study about it. I think the space looks beautiful. And my third reason is, I want to see the Earth.

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I'm pretty sure you'll be a great space scientist in the future. :)
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