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Why is it important to have a good diet?

Today's topic is about the importance of having a good diet. It's because having a healthy body is important. So we have to do diet and improve our physical ability. A good diet makes us more healthy. It is important in our life. We can also have a good mental health. So that's why a good diet is important.

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