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   제 목   A New Day.    상 태  
   작성자   pjh0223    등록일   2018-02-18
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Febuary eighteen Sunday. It was very cool. -------------------------------A New Day----------------------------------------------------- Today is anew day I'm very excited and happy. because my cosin come to Busan. then cosin before seoul. but my cosin a new days celebrate to new day Next time please to come in Busan for cosin.

 

 

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February 18, Sunday. It's very cool. Today is a new day. I'm very excited and happy because one of my cousins came here in Busan and my cousin from Seoul. The other cousin celebrated new year in their home. I hope he'll come and visit me next time.

 

 

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