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   작성자   winter050    등록일   2018-04-24
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Winter050/Yuk Jinseul

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Why do we need plants?

Plants everywhere we look we can see flowers,grass,and trees. They are beautiful to look and plants are very useful in our lives.

First,plants give us food.Vegetables are have a lot of vitamins.They are very nutritious. fruits are also have alot of vitamins and very nutritious.We can eat them raw and cooking. Also they are very delicious!!

Second,plants are used to make herb aroma. Herb aroma smell really good! For example,you can make treat with herbal aromatherapy and make various things like shampoo and soap.

In conclusion, plants help our lives in many ways.They give us tasty foods to eat.Plants are amazing and very important for all people.

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Plants are everywhere. We can see flowers, trees and grasses around us. They are beautiful to look and very useful in our lives.

First, plants give us foods like vegetables and fruits. Vegetables and fruits have a lot of vitamins which are very nutritious to our body. Vegetables can be eaten either raw or cooked while fruits can be eaten anything you want to be. However, both are very delicious.

Second, there are plants that are aromatic herb. These kind of plants smells really good. You can actually treat other people using aromatic herbal plants by making various things from it like soap and shampoo.

In conclusion, plants help our lives in so many ways. They give us tasty foods to eat and things that can be use at home. I can really say that we need plants because plants are amazing and very important to people.

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Plants are really helpful to us. Great job with your essay Erica :)

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