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   작성자   winter116    등록일   2018-04-25
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Hi Helen,

Here are some corrections that I made ^^

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In Korea, there are many kinds of special days. Koreans celebrate special days in different ways. 

The special day that I like the most is my "birthday" because this is the day when I was born and it is an opportunity that only comes once a year.

Also, I can enjoy my birthday with my family and relatives! I'm also happy because I can eat cake and delicious food!

Moreover, the most important thing is that I can get gifts from my family and friends!

If I am lucky, I may receive a little bit money! So I like my birthday very much! Hahahahahaha!!!!!!

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