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   작성자   cloe2848    등록일   2018-04-25
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Hello!I'm ga hyeon. Let me write about adventures. If I can go to an adventure, I'll go to three different places and this would be my list: 1.New york- I want to go there because I want to see the statue of liberty. 2.Bermuda triangle- It is a mysterious place, so I want to solve the mystery. 3. Space- Space is also full of mystery, and my dream is to become a space scientist. Those are all the places I want to go to. 

 

Good job Ga Hyeon! I hope you'll experience the adventure you've been dreaming of. Thanks for sending your homework! :)

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