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   작성자   blusea2514    등록일   2018-05-27
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A New Fun Experience

I went on a picnic 3 weeks ago. Mom got up early in the morning. She made kimbap for me. I went to school in a good mood. We got on bus no.1. I went to Toyeong Doyechon. I made pottery. I felt very good.

Hi Peter! You did very well in doing your homework, it's impressive. :)
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