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   제 목   my favorite subject    상 태  
   작성자   winter093    등록일   2018-05-29
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My favorite subject is history, especially Korean history. Because I think history is one story like soap opera, play, or movie. It's really interesting work of me to study history. I like to read history books. They are very fun. I also like to take history class. My teacher is bald, but it doesn't matter to learn history. Last summer I took a Korean history exam and I passed. When I realized that I passed, I was very happy. Howver, I am not good at it world history. If I have time to study world history, I want to study world history more deeply than now. (This is not wrong. However, it would be better to use a pronoun in this part to avoid repetition.)

My favorite subject is history, especially Korean history. Because I think history is like a one soap opera, play, or movie. Studying history is a really interesting work for me. I like to read history books. They are very fun. I also like to take history class. My teacher is bald, but it doesn't matter in learning history. Last summer, I took a Korean history exam and I passed. When I realized that I passed, I was very happy. However, I am not good at world history. If I have time to study world history, I want to study it more deeply than now.

Hello Lucy! :)

Thank you for sending your work! You did a really great job! Teacher is really impressed. ;)

Keep it up!

 

   이전글 A new fun experience
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