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   작성자   toto2824    등록일   2018-11-09
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On the 9th of November Today's night my sister crying. she sick!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm very scary. why? .............. I don't no but I'm sad. becouse my sister is sicksicksick . I don't like sick.

CORRECTIONS:

On the 9th of November which is today's night, my sister is crying.

She's sick! I'm very scared.

Why? I don't know but I'm sad, because my sister is sick.

I don't like sick.

COMMENTS:

Good job on creating the sentences! Let's work on some grammar structure. By the way, I hope your sister is getting better now. Keep on writing!

-Lovely

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