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   작성자   boram0806    등록일   2018-11-09
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Friday, November 9, 2018 I like tokpoky and gimbap very much!!! In today morning, my English club teacher buy tokboky and gimbab ( cheese gimbab , original gimbab, tuna gimbab ) My favorite gimbab is tuna gimbab. But, tokboky is spicy so, today I ate many cheese gimbab . I love spicy food but, I can't eat spicy food.TT

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Friday, November 9, 2018.

I like toboki and gimbap very much!

In today's morning, my English club teacher buys a toboki and gimbap (cheese gimbap, original gimbap and tuna gimbap).

My favorite gimbap is tuna.

But toboki is spicy so I just eat a lot of cheese gimbap.

I love spicy food but I can't eat it.

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