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   작성자   ljm2327    등록일   2019-02-11
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I came to the Jeju Island with my family. Maybe I have been there for four times. but I get excited every time I go there. I’m worried because my throat is sore and my head is dizzy, but I hope it will be okay. I looked online and found some good tourist places and a famous restaurant. Jeju Island has good food. It is a trip with family, so it seems to be a famous restaurant tour rather than sightseeing. As soon as I arrived, I ate meat noodles. I had to wait for 30 minutes after I order.. Now I’m going to eat black pigs. My mom is my drinking buddy. So I’ll have a drinking with my mother.

CORRECTIONS:

I went to Jeju Island with my family.

I've been there for four times now, but I still feel so excited every time I go there

. I’m worried because I have a soar throat and I feel dizzy, but I hope it will be okay.

I looked online and found some good tourist places and a famous restaurant.

Jeju Island has good food. It is a place for family, so it seems to be a famous restaurant tour rather than sightseeing.

As soon as I arrived, I ate meat noodles.

I have to wait for 30 minutes after I order.

Now I’m going to eat black pigs.

My mom is my drinking buddy.

So I drink with my mother.

COMMENTS:

It's good to know that you're having fun with your family. I wanna hear more from you, Leah. Keep on writing!

-Lovely

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