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   작성자   ljm2327    등록일   2019-02-11
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I went shopping at department store to buy clothes to wear on a trip. I usually go window shopping to find what I want to buy and then I order it online. Online shopping is generally less expensive. But I don’t have time to buy clothes online so I go to the department store. I wanted to buy all of them, but suppressed the urge. I got a shirt and a knitwear. I really liked it :)

CORRECTIONS:

 I went shopping at a department store to buy some clothes to wear on a trip.

 I usually do window shopping to find what I want to buy and then I order it online.

Online shopping is generally less expensive.

But I don’t have time to buy clothes online so I have to go to the department store.

I wanted to buy all of them, but I suppressed the urge.

I bought a shirt and a knitwear.

I really liked it.

COMMENTS:
 Great sentences! I wanna hear more from you, Leah. Keep on writing!

-Lovely

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