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   작성자   toto2824    등록일   2019-02-12
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Today's science class we learn atmospheric pressure. and yesterday science's materials is yogurt and straw, but lots of friends hasn't materials.me too.and mission is ' In 3 seconds eat finished yogurt.' is easy. but all friends don't clear. is weird. I want to challenge but I don't have yogurt and straw. my teacher says " tomorow is science time too then. tomorow this mission too." yee

CORRECTIONS:
Today in our science class, we learn about the atmospheric pressure.

And yesterday, during our science class, we used some materials like yogurt and straw.

Some of my friends doesn;t have any of it as well as I am.

Our mission is to drink the yogurt in three seconds and it's weird.

I want to try it but I don't have any of those materials.

And os my teacher says that tomorrow is also our experiment time and we will also do the same thing we do today.

COMMENTS:

It's great to know that you're having so much fun. But please observe proper captalization. I wanna hear more from you, Jason. Keep on writing!

-Lovely

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