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   작성자   ljm2327    등록일   2019-02-13
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Valentine’s Day is coming. I take a class to make a chocolate for my boyfriend. I feel bad about not being able to give a 100-day gift for my boyfriend. So I make it. At first, It wasn’t easy for me... I’m sure that he’ll like the chocolate I made.

CORRECTIONS:

Valentine’s Day is coming.

I took a class to make a chocolate for my boyfriend.

I feel bad about not being able to give a gift to my boyfriend on our 100-day.

So I make it.

At first, It wasn’t easy for me but I’m sure that he’ll like the chocolate I made.


COMMENTS:

How sweet of you and great sentences! I wanna hear more from you, Leah. Keep on writing!

-Lovely

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