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   제 목   Don't ignore gorillas. They can help people.    상 태  
   작성자   isjjang7    등록일   2019-03-15
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Today I learned about animal- if you have stomache, go to the gorillas. Do you know about the title means or do you know why the title is? Yes, it is based on one siencist's discovery. Ones of apon a time, one siencist got to know the gorillas have a lots of different kinds of plants that give good effective to human. For exmple, the gorillas have stomache, they eat some plants, lastly, they have be cured. And, that plants give good effective to human. The scientists research what is favorite plants of it, and is it give good effective to people? The result of research is success. They researched 71 kinds of plants, and the 30 kinds of plants give good effective to human.

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 I learned about animal today

If you have a stomache, go to the gorillas.

Do you know the meaning of the title ? Yes, it is based on one sientist's discovery.

Once upon a time, there's a sientist who got to know the gorillas.

They have different kinds of plants that give good effect in human.

For example, if the gorillas have stomache, they eat some plants, and  they'll be cured.

And, that plants give good effect in human.

The scientists research of what is favorite plants of gorillas, and if it has a good effect on people?

The result of the research is success.

They researched 71 kinds of plants, and 30 kinds of plants that give good effect in human


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Great sentences! I wanna hear more from you, Jang in seo. Keep on writing!

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