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   제 목   Fine dust    상 태  
   작성자   boram0806    등록일   2019-03-15
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Friday, March 15, 2019 These day, fine dust are so bad in our city. So, I can't do our P.E class in school. I am so sad about this TT. When fine dust are very bad my throat is tender. And, my skin make more pimple on my forehead. I worried about my lungs because fine dust give much damage in to my lungs. I want to fine dust get better than now TT.

CORRECTIONS:

Friday, March 15, 2019.

This day, fine dust is so bad in our city.

We can't do our P.E class in school and I'm so sad about it.

When the fine dust is too bad, my throat is starting to sore.

And my forehead has a lot of pimples too.

I'm also worried about my lungs because the fine dust cause too much damage in my lungs.


COMMENTS:

Please make it more clear next time,. By the way, I hope you're okay now. I wanna hear more from you, Esther. Keep on writing!

-Lovely

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