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   작성자   marina116arp    등록일   2019-07-11
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Why is It Important to Have a Law?

Today's topic is "Why is it important to have a law?" The law is very important in the world. It exists to protect people's rights. If we don't obey the law, the world will be confusing and troubling. That's why a law is important in this world. To make the world peaceful, we have to follow the laws. It makes us safe and happy.


Comment:
Good job, Biny! You have brilliant ideas! I hope to hear from you next time. I'm waiting for your next essay. ^^ T.Clariz

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