Correction:

Today is Pepero Day. And it’s my parents’s wedding anniversary. Today is a special day. I didn’t know today was November 11th. I still haven’t eaten Pepero today. But I ate bar rice cake. The number 11 is similar to Pepero and bar rice cake. Today is my parent’s wedding anniversary so we ate beef. I haven’t given my parents a present yet. I want to give Pepero as a present to my parents today.

Comment:
Great job, An Jaeyoung! Continue to write essays. ^^